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BaftaBaby 
"Always entranced by cinema."

Posted - 06/08/2007 :  07:03:04  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
I'm calling this Sal's 4 Word Stories. OK? Make 'em up and post 'em here.

The idea is a rip-off from the Guardian's 6-word stories seen elsewhere on these boards. Perhaps we could send them to the Grauniad* en masse and get some publicity for FWFR and benj!

So, an evocative [even shorter] story in 4 words.

Here are a trio to start you off:
1. Robins fledge. Cat. Oops!
2. Cake's baked, iced. "Congratulations!"
3. "Mom?" "Darling!" "I passed!"

* Grauniad, for those not in the UK, is a nickname bestowed on the paper which has more than its fair share of spelling errors, despite some excellent editorial content.

ChocolateLady 
"500 Chocolate Delights"

Posted - 06/08/2007 :  07:25:22  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Titanic! Iceberg! Tragic end.

"Mind the gap!" Ooops!

Couples' troubles, solved! Happiness.

Vampire. Silver bullet. SUCCESS!





Edited by - ChocolateLady on 06/08/2007 07:28:51
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Beanmimo 
"August review site"

Posted - 06/08/2007 :  09:24:39  Show Profile  Reply with Quote

Meet, love, marry, die.

Toy broken, cry, fixed.
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duh 
"catpurrs"

Posted - 06/08/2007 :  16:38:26  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Saddled. Bridled. Mounted. Tossed.
Funny! Laughed! Stared at.
Opened mouth. Engaged brain.
Engaged brain. Mouth shut.

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Rovark 
"Luck-pushing, rule-bending, chance-taking reviewer"

Posted - 06/08/2007 :  19:45:03  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Not sure if these are strictly 'stories' or just evocative lines that push you make up your own story

'Course I love you

Chemo unsuccessful. I'm sorry

I never told her

Miss? ahh, bad news...

Life: hatched, matched, dispatched

You're not the father

Size doesn't reeeeealy matter

Please contact the clinic

We never spoke again

I Do ..... I Don't

Edited by - Rovark on 06/08/2007 19:55:29
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MisterBadIdea 
"PLZ GET MILK, KTHXBYE"

Posted - 06/08/2007 :  19:47:22  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
I hope you die.
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TitanPa 
"Here four more"

Posted - 06/08/2007 :  20:24:29  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by ChocolateLady



Vampire. Silver bullet. SUCCESS!








Sory for being such a geek. Wodden Stakes are for Vampires. Silver bullets for Werewolves.
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aahaa, muahaha 
"Optimistic altruist, incurable romantic"

Posted - 06/09/2007 :  05:53:54  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
He married. The end.
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ChocolateLady 
"500 Chocolate Delights"

Posted - 06/09/2007 :  08:03:51  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by TitanPa

quote:
Originally posted by ChocolateLady



Vampire. Silver bullet. SUCCESS!




Sory for being such a geek. Wodden Stakes are for Vampires. Silver bullets for Werewolves.



Ah... well then..


Warewolf, Silver bullet, SUCCESS!

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MisterBadIdea 
"PLZ GET MILK, KTHXBYE"

Posted - 06/09/2007 :  16:15:35  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
i love you goodbye
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MM0rkeleb 
"Better than HBO."

Posted - 06/10/2007 :  01:27:50  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
"OOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHH!"
"OOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHH!"
"Done!"
"Damn."


"ZZZZZZZZZZZ-"
"Arfarfarfarfarfarfarfarfarf-"
BANG!
"ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ."
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w22dheartlivie 
"Kitty Lover"

Posted - 06/10/2007 :  05:26:34  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Here, Adam. An apple.
Want fries with that?
Baby?? Is it mine?
I loved, I lost.
Black man is lynched.
Paris jailed. Released. Jailed.


The series:
Eyes meet. First kiss.
Will you? They married.
Honey, it turned blue.
They have a son.
Harvard wrote, you're in.
Lawyer marries college sweetheart.
Mom? It's a girl!
Years pass, happy holidays.
Cancer? Are you sure?
He dies. She waits.
Old woman, rocking chair.
She sleeps, white light.
Following light, he awaits.
Eyes meet, first kiss.


Edited by - w22dheartlivie on 06/10/2007 21:13:39
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Chris C 
"Four words, never backwards."

Posted - 06/10/2007 :  23:24:57  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by M0rkeleb



"ZZZZZZZZZZZ-"
"Arfarfarfarfarfarfarfarfarf-"
BANG!
"ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ."




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duh 
"catpurrs"

Posted - 06/11/2007 :  02:29:47  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by wildhartlivie


The series:
Eyes meet. First kiss.
Will you? They married.
Honey, it turned blue.
They have a son.
Harvard wrote, you're in.
Lawyer marries college sweetheart.
Mom? It's a girl!
Years pass, happy holidays.
Cancer? Are you sure?
He dies. She waits.
Old woman, rocking chair.
She sleeps, white light.
Following light, he awaits.
Eyes meet, first kiss.





Damn, that's poetry!
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w22dheartlivie 
"Kitty Lover"

Posted - 06/12/2007 :  03:58:45  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by duh

quote:
Originally posted by wildhartlivie


The series:
Eyes meet. First kiss.
Will you? They married.
Honey, it turned blue.
They have a son.
Harvard wrote, you're in.
Lawyer marries college sweetheart.
Mom? It's a girl!
Years pass, happy holidays.
Cancer? Are you sure?
He dies. She waits.
Old woman, rocking chair.
She sleeps, white light.
Following light, he awaits.
Eyes meet, first kiss.





Damn, that's poetry!



Thank you :) I was thinking of my grandmother mostly, after my grandfather died. She waited 10 years in a wicker rocking chair on her front porch and died in her sleep. None of us went to Harvard, but hey, license!
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